@retro_bread welcome to our wonderful forum, a place where we share goodness.
From what I can read you might have some basic IT knowledge to obtain, that are lacking, foundations to have, essential skills and understanding.
I would focus on learning the basics, alongside of having your first questions answered.
Google and YouTube are filled with content you can learn from, you just need to search.
Going in a forum asking specific questions and having them sorted out for you while the above is still lacking will lead to no good and frustration.
viewtopic.php?t=9240 here there is a useful topic list and you should familiarize yourself. You can for instance read Making a CD or USB for your First Boot as already suggested.
the version that i have is
BookwormPup64_10.0.9
i cant update to newest version for now
so i ask if this version could working with me
Very likely yes. As far as I know there are no correlations between the improvements in the last bookwormpup64 version and the goal you are trying to reach (puppy linux in usb drive).
If you browse the forum it is easy to find the change-log here viewtopic.php?p=89021#p89021